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It was snowing again and I smiled as I stared at the white flakes fluttering by my window. It was (capitalized the C)Christmas, and my day had been one of the best all year. First I (had removed) awakened in the morning to the sound of my brother (added the n to runing)running madly around the house, yelling that it was Christmas. Jumping out of bed, (capitalized the i that was there)I skipped happily down the stairs, with my brother at my heels, and made my way to the Christmas tree in the living room. My parents(apostrophe removed from between the t and s) groggily walked down the stairs to watch us open (up removed) our presents. My Mom sat down on the couch and dad plopped himself on the floor, grumbling something about coffee. I started opening my presents because, after all, its ladies first. Ripping open the wrapping paper, I stared down at my brand(removed dash)new pink boom box. It was beautiful!(question mark changed to exclamation) (capitalized e)Even more, it came with little, stick-on jewels to decorate the boom box. Mom and Dad finally got their coffee and we all took turns watching each other open presents. I got(get turned to got) many more presents that were absolutely amazing. (changed every one into one word)Everyone spends the rest of the day admiring their gifts and playing with their new toys. "I will remember this Christmas forever,"(added endnote) I thought. (capitalized s)Sighing contentedly, I finally turned away from the snow (removed the e from what was danceing)dancing outside the window and rejoined my family.
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Change ''Ranches'' to ''ranch'' and ''gallops'' to ''gallop.''
The complete sentence would be ''Horses from the ranch gallop in the nearby fields.'' If this is is a one choice only question i'd go with changing ''Gallops'' To ''Gallop''. hope this helped
<u>At the flat Tom rented for Myrtle, their neighbor Mr. McKee discussed </u><u>aspects of his photography business and techniques</u>. <em>(...) They arrive at Tom and Myrtle’s city apartment, and Nick proceeds to get drunk. Myrtle calls up her cute sister, Catherine, and their neighbors, the McKees, and invites them over. Mrs. McKee tells Myrtle that her dress looks wonderful on her. Mrs. McKee tells her husband, who’s a professional photographer, that he should take pictures of Myrtle (...).</em>
The novel (The Great Gatsby was written by F. Scott Fitzgerald) recounts the chaos of the First World War. American society lives an unprecedented level of prosperity. At the same time, the prohibition on the production/consumption of alcoholic beverages made a large number of millionaires outside the commodity sale circuit and provoked an increase in organized crime. The 1925 story takes place in New York and in the city of Long Island during the summer of 1922.
<span>A)You will collect.
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