Question

Please help, I will give brainliest. I need more than one answer.

Answer 1

This is a very well educated opening statement for someone who has not graduated law school! So congrats! My only adjustments would be these:

1- when you address the court to begin your statements please keep in mind the that this is not a casual conversation. Try something like “Your honor” *and then begin* or something along those lines.

2- remove anything that would sway the jury in an emotional way. Although this is a valid issue, you need to be sure they approach this with a common sense mindset. So stick to the facts and do not try to build a sob story :)

3- Like i mentioned earlier, this was very good and well written. I would personally not make so many repetitions in your statements to which you would sound unprofessional. That is the last thing you want.

4- one of the most helpful things to master is to replace any words with other words or statements that make your argument more solid. Professionalism is key!!

Good luck!