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ira [324]
3 years ago
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50 pts !!!!! can someone pls Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for t

his topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.

Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.

Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.

this is the paragraph.


Anybody the can attack when you are down or even when you don’t even expect it. No one even knows, but even maybe one of your own friends is like that. Some people just do this to be able to gain money, friends or maybe they just dislike you.Everyone knows at least one person like that. Anywhere you go, you will mostly but in to one.
Social Studies
1 answer:
lozanna [386]3 years ago
3 0

Answer:

revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made. View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission. Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise. Copy this paragraph into a new document. Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic. Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax. Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing. In one document, submit: the original paragraph the revised paragraph the reflection on the changes you have made Save your work to your computer or drive. Submit your work in 02.10 Kick It Up a Notch.

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