<span>"He does not realize the demands he is making upon nature. . . . "</span>
B.. a characters thought and impressions presented exactely as they accur
Is the information given mostly led with facts? If it is filled with opinions, you can not trust the source, because it is not reliable information. Also, are there references? The information must have reliable cites to back the information up.
In narrative writing in your writing in first person mode so you have to start your sentences with I.
try writing as many vivid details as possible.
Use dialogue by can help you engage with the reader and add some realism to it.
it's important to weave your emotions so you can engage The reader.
