Answer:While making a summary it is very important to keep a few things in mind. Some of them are 1. Carefully select the theme of the passage 2. Read with who, what, when, where, why, and how questions in mind 3. Do not rewrite the original text 4. Leave no scope for confusion 5. Include all the main ideas 6. Do not include any unnecessary or repetitive sentences 7. Do not make any assumptions 8. The length of the summary must not exceed 25 percent of the original text 9. Do not change the original source.
Answer:
valley of Death
Explanation:
The fate of the Light Brigade was their riding into the valley of Death. Seeing that the British soldiers were few in number and ill-equipped when compared to the Russian forces they went to fight against in 1854, we can say that they were literally moving into the valley of Death.
This confrontation led to the exposure of 600 of them to the attack of the Russian forces. 195 soldiers still had their horses after the first attack, but they lost 118 men in death. 127 of the men were wounded while 60 soldiers were imprisoned.
6) No- should be adapt
7) Yes
8) No- need to switch isle and aisle
9) Yes
10) No- first word should be They're
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Simply by telling them to stop
