D is pointless because just rewriting it doesn't mean it is going to be better
B could help for spelling errors, but probably won't help with distracting errors
The answer could be A or C because with both of those you are getting an opinion from someone else. The answer is most likely C, because peer review tends to be more encouraged than teacher review.
The answer you are looking for is B, participle.
Answer:
Point of view is important to any story, because it can help create the mood, and setting of a piece. In “The Tell-Tale Heart” Poe uses first person point of view to create suspense and tension, while letting the reader try to discover the thoughts of the narrator.