Answer: all of this is great but to make it better i think in the last sentence of the conclusion instead of "we will see what this years election will bring us you should put hopefully this years election will bring america a president that has the answers to this pandemic
I think that you did a great job and better than I can do :'). But maybe you can add an someones opinion of how Trump is handling it, like interview someone or credit an interview someone else did idk.
