Question

CAN SOMEONE CHECK THIS FOR PUNCTUATION AND SPELLING PLEASE :)

Answer 1

Answer:

no some punctuation are wrong the "45% is about to be 45% and after 5 years you shouldn't use comma. This much I don't see other mistakes!

Answer 2

Surprising to read^ / makes the reader think^ about “what’s the reason for teachers not staying at their jobs when they are young and full of energy (this makes it better)