Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
Answer: he is saying how everyone is feeling during his time when African American and how there is no changes how other people act towards them, he is poor and people steal and hurt him too so he wants to die also cuz hes gets problems for being African American
Since diction in writing refers to the choice of words, the answer is A - strategic word choice used in persuasive rhetoric.
Answer:
D
Explanation:
A. this is an example of active transport and it uses up energy, not producing
B. this is an example of chloroplasts, and it does not produce energy, it creates photosynthesis
C. Proteins are not produced by mitochondria
D. Mitochondria are the powerhouses of a cell, this answer is correct
I think its c because different things happen and if theres a talking dog it would be an overriding idea i think im right