Guys, can you please help me. I'm tasked to write a story and English is not my first language so can you check if my grammar is
correct? You also add something if you want. :) Please don't judge me I'm not a writer.
Walking down this street was so empty. It's kinda nice though. I feel like I'm walking in an magical forest. It's calm, beautiful and I enjoy it. As I walked further, I saw a house peeking through the tall trees. I was getting closer and closer and saw how enormous it really is. Standing by the mansion's gate made me feel tiny like Alice in Wonderland. The exterior are painted white and their windows are as tall as the trees. Their beautiful and large garden was spread throughout from left to right. In the middle, you can see a huge water fountain just a few meters in front their door where the birds chirp as they drink and bathe. I walked a few steps after I passed the mansion and saw another gate that was connected to the mansion. There were cars parked in there. Their shiny exterior reflected the sunlight as it hits them. The dark red car which almost looks like the color of a cherry caught my eye. It was exquisite and it was the most unique thing I've ever seen. I was left in shock how rich these people are. They're like living the life of royals. How good their life must be.
Answer: it’s because deep down they really didn’t want to die.
Explanation: they were going through a rough time and they felt like they didn’t want to exist, but deep down inside they knew they really didn’t want to die. They have a future ahead of them as well
