Guys, can you please help me. I'm tasked to write a story and English is not my first language so can you check if my grammar is
correct? You also add something if you want. :) Please don't judge me I'm not a writer.
Walking down this street was so empty. It's kinda nice though. I feel like I'm walking in an magical forest. It's calm, beautiful and I enjoy it. As I walked further, I saw a house peeking through the tall trees. I was getting closer and closer and saw how enormous it really is. Standing by the mansion's gate made me feel tiny like Alice in Wonderland. The exterior are painted white and their windows are as tall as the trees. Their beautiful and large garden was spread throughout from left to right. In the middle, you can see a huge water fountain just a few meters in front their door where the birds chirp as they drink and bathe. I walked a few steps after I passed the mansion and saw another gate that was connected to the mansion. There were cars parked in there. Their shiny exterior reflected the sunlight as it hits them. The dark red car which almost looks like the color of a cherry caught my eye. It was exquisite and it was the most unique thing I've ever seen. I was left in shock how rich these people are. They're like living the life of royals. How good their life must be.
We can clearly see that Gilgamesh and Enkidu were triumphant in their battle against Humbaba because Gilgamesh is carrying his head. They killed to monster and chopped his head off in order to show it as proof of their victory. Only in option D do we see the result of their battle, which they won.
The right answer for the question that is being asked and shown above is that: "Tom’s abandonment of his family." At the opening of the play, Tom is dressed in a merchant sailor uniform, which foreshadows Tom’s abandonment of his family.
