Main Points, Transitions and Quotations would be the best answer for this.
Correct, there isn’t anything else you can do to the sentence.
The best way to write the possessive of circus in the singular form is circus'
Sentence 2 has the correct parallel structure.
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If you mean from this sentence, there aren´t any. Add a picture and I´ll come back to change my answer!
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