somethings not "write" in the town . Change it to right
Last sentence after Nevertheless it needs a comma
Second sentence Thoughts rushed "threw" jacks mind. Change it to through
I insist you go first
the park appealed against closure
a wisp of hair
I couldn't travel anywhere for vacation :( Sad Times...
Answer: 2nd one:)
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