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People should feel free to eat chocolate on a regular basis, because consuming chocolate has positive health effects. For exampl

Katena32 [7]

Answer:

Yes, eat dark chocolate in moderation

Explanation:

If you eat too much dark chocolate, you may experience immediate unpleasant symptoms such as indigestion, headache and heartburn. Chocolate's mild psychoactive effects could also produce a feeling of alertness and elation, followed by lethargy and depression. Dark chocolate, a semisweet blend of at least 70 percent cacao powder plus sugar, milk and other ingredients, could also cause rapid weight gain. If you eat moderate amounts of dark chocolate, you should see benefits rather than health problems

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3 years ago

Though pompous, he was an entertaining person.

Reil [10]

Lol i have no clue what this mean so if you need the answer to anything vheck out my profile and follow me

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3 years ago

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Which option is the best example of a conflict in a narrative?

mylen [45]

Answer:

C

Just Trust me I know. Trust.

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3 years ago

Why was the russian involvement in the war so important to the allies?

Alchen [17]

In 1914 the Russian government considered Germany to be the main threat to its territory. This was reinforced by Germany's decision to form the Triple Alliance. Under the terms of this military alliance, Germany, Austria-Hungary and Italy agreed to support each other if attacked by either France or Russia. In 1907 Russia joined Britain and France to form the Triple Entente.
Industrial unrest in Russia continued throughout this period and in 1912 hundreds of striking miners were massacred at the Lena goldfields. During the first six months of 1914, almost half of the total industrial workforce in Russia took part in strikes.
In 1914 the Russian Army was the largest army in the world. However, Russia's poor roads and railways made the effective deployment of these soldiers difficult.
The Russian Army Air Service (RAAS) was established in 1912 and two years later owned 360 aircraft and 16 airships. This made the RAAS the largest airforce in the world.
In 1914 the Russian Navy had 4 battleships, 10 cruisers, 21 destroyers, 11 submarines and 50 torpedo boats.
On the outbreak of the First World War General Alexander Samsonov was given command of the Russian Second Army for the invasion of East Prussia. He advanced slowly into the south western corner of the province with the intention of linking up with General Paul von Rennenkampf advancing from the north east.

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4 years ago

PLEASE HELP!!!

EleoNora [17]

Part A:

sources:

unable to link sorry

Part B:

setting: background

similarity: both are supposed to represent a rose garden.

Difference: one is much more of a courtyard and the other looks much more like a shed.

characters: costume

similarity: very similar, all old fashioned. They have the main guy, a servant, a knight and a man named toby.

characters: body language and facial expressions

similarity: lord doesn't know how to smile. toby gets mad that the lord wants him to curtsy for him, the foolish night is happy to be included and the servant is quiet.

tone of voice

similarity: main guy is just some angry old guy with an angry, full of himself tone

actions

similarities: The three side characters are sneaking up on the lord as he finds this letter.

differences: in one video the three impersonate statues while in the other they impersonate being flowers in a garden.

lighting

similarity: very well lit you can tell it is supposed to be day time during this scene

camera: focus and angles

difference: in one video the camera focuses more on the lord while the other video focuses on the three characters.

dialogue: word choice

similarity: old

difference: one is much easier to understand while the other has more difficult language

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similarity: was on the note and three characters.

Part C:

It is obvious to see that these videos are recorded in different times and by different actors, however both are very done. The first video seems as though it was done many years ago. the 2nd might show a modern version in someone's backyard and with a much poorer production.

The plays are very similar to each other, both have amazing actors who play the four characters, the attire is on point and the backgrounds are similar to the extent that you can catagorise the setting into being some sort of rose garden.

It is clear that the dialogue was different between the two. In the first video, the dialogue was much older and difficult to understand. The second video was more modernised to the point where the language was more simplified and easier to understand while still keeping that “shakespearean tone”.

In conclusion both videos did an amazing job sticking to the original play.

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3 years ago