<span>Language can connect people and build relationships. Every person, has the instinct and the need to connect with other people, as well as establish a good relationship with them. It is a good habit to learn more and to have a good mental health too.</span>
So we were in a hall like a
P.E hall and I had my dolls out like the ones i got a couple of years ago but then all of a sudden they disappeared and loads of dogs appeared so of course you know me I stole 2 but then we had to hide so I hid in the corner of the room with the dogs but Voldemort came in the room saying “WHERE ARE MY DOGS GONE “ and I just like popped out of the Corner with the dogs in my hands and I say “idk” and then me and Voldemort had a full on magic fight and of course I won .and then I had to give the dogs back to the owners cause I’m a nice person but then we were in a car with Grace Tracy like the chemist person and Mam but grace had like done something wrong at the chemist like stole something so she had to apologise but then we were back in the hall room and mam asked for the dolls and I had a one with really brown curly hair and a one with black straight hair and a blond one with curlyish hair but I wanted to keep the first two and she could have the last one but I didn’t let her have the first one cause thats s the one I wanted to keep . I went shopping w Voldemort and when I came back my drink spilled and she vid angry at me so then that part ended .and then we were in the car again and grace had to apologise for something she did to Tracy
So I had to look up what some thing meant for you (grace).but I had to connect to the wifi in the chemist but Tracy had blocked our family’s phones and all that from her wifi so I couldn’t use it and then ....the End .
I recently read Anne Frank but the best answer i can give would be narrowing it down to b and d
<span>C. revising the overall structure and flow of your writing
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I think it would be ‘problem and solution’ but i haven’t read the article because it isn’t linked. however ‘problem and solution’ does sound like it would fit best :)
