While Lady Crawford was in the hospital, she emailed Ms. White.
Lady Crawford, while in the hospital, emailed Ms. White.
While overseas on deployment, Tidus reported to his supervisor.
Tidus reported to his supervisor when overseas on deployment. 
While Mariah was on vacation, Sarah offered to clean her apartment. 
Sarah, while Mariah was on vacation, offered to clean her apartment.
Since Beth had lost her watch, she and Melissa were both late.
Melissa and Beth were both late, since Beth had lost her watch.
        
                    
             
        
        
        
hey dude everything will be fine haha are you looking for someone to write this for you??? 
you should write about your dad or grandpa like 
What details about the physical appearance or conduct of your dad/grandpa would add to my impression?
What personal habits does he have?
How does he react under stress?
How does he react to other people?
What impression does his facial expression bring to others?
write it on a site that counts your words and it should be easy
unless youre looking for someone to do it for you we would have to know your family members haha or someone that you know very closely 
 
        
             
        
        
        
She can write very well and has a good use of describing words like adjectives and adverbs. She can describe seems to a point that you feel your actually there. It is depressing, but she was such a high spirited girl that she tried to keep it like looking forward for the brightest new tomorrow.
        
                    
             
        
        
        
a word of grattitude is happy and thank you 
( i really did not get what you were asking)