Im not exactly sure what you need corrected specifically but here’s what I got:
1. He has blood on his face.
2. You need to put salt and pepper in the/this bowl of soup, it has no flavor!
Or
You need to put salt and pepper in the/this bowl of soup. It has no flavor!
He uses various rhetorical means of proving his claims such as appealing to emotions. He presents the case of the King's behavior in such a way that is supposed to elicit an emotional response from the reader and motivate them to support the rebellion. Not only that but it is also masked as common sense so as to make it seem sensible.
Love and death are very common themes that can be used in poetry and in life.
