Don't be intimidated!
Here, I'll go first.
1. <em>I</em><em> went to a comic convention once and I was with my family so I was a little nervous about it since I'm a bit insecure about my interests. Anyways there was a lot of noise and confusion so we just followed the crowd into the building and walked up and down all the little shops and vender carts. it was really noisy so I had trouble talking to my family, so we went upstairs to see the cosplay runway instead. </em>
2<em>.</em><em> </em><em>I</em><em> cluched my bag close to my chest as the crowd inched towards the glass entryway of the building; a building I wasn't sure my family would enjoy yet. We hadn't waited long, but the drive had already work away most of my patience. I tapped my fingers against my arms until my mom, dad, sister and I were each given silver entry cards. As I tugged my hair out from under the card's necklace, the blue tarp was pulled away to reveal the convention. Hundreds of banners hung from the ceiling above large, vibrant signs pinned to the tops of rows and rows of different stands. People rushed around, shopping bags already filled as they shrieked and shouted past each other. I lead my family through the crowds with a wicked grin, abandoning my insecurities as my eyes danced across soft plushes, plastic figures, leather jackets, mystery boxes, and costumes. Cosplays, I corrected my family, as I asked for pictures with them. My sister held her ears, groveling at the building headache we all felt. With ease I navigated the crowd, twisting between the movements with chaotic rhythm, dancing in harmony. </em>
Ok that's 194 words. See, it's just about being more descriptive about the things that matter and skipping over more redundant phrases like "then we went upstairs." Try to really capture the fwel of the moment, using lists and easier sentences to quicken the pace and more punctuation to slow it down. Good luck!
King Edward VII was famous for numerous things. He was known as the Peacemaker for his great relationships with other countries; during his reign socialism started to develop in the UK, and he brought the crown closer to the people by taking part in public events and extending the amount of people that the royalty spent time with.
B. This is a run-on statement.
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Answer:
1. Explanatory introduction: In this type of introduction, the author can explain what global warming is, in a few words. In this way, he begins the essay with a generalized explanation of the topic that he will develop during the essay.
2. Chronological introduction: The author can begin by explaining how the world we know came to global warming, showing how the climate evolved from a state with a low risk of global warming, until today.
3. Personal introduction: The author can tell a personal story of how the global warming affected some of his experience, with this, he manages to start the essay showing a real impact of this climatic phenomenon.
Explanation:
The introduction is a very important element of the text and manages to announce a subject that will be addressed and detailed throughout the text. This element is important to situate the reader or the audience about what will be addressed and thus create an organized and functional structure throughout the text.
There are several ways to write an essay and the author must choose the one that best suits his writing style and the audience he wants to reach, as well as the essay's objective.