-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
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His hopes from this poem if to gain enough support to end these violent bombings once and for all. Finally the theme of this poem is that drone warfare is a sickening tactic used by military and diplomacy should be implement more.
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take the s off of it and turn it into ix 9
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I think the answer is : although the Kamba chopped down the fig tree, the Maasai tribe is still connected with Enkai through their cattle.
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How central ideas connect
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