Have to use transitional words for your work to flow. In the beginning middle end. you don't want to seem as if it all goes together, you don't need evidence or commentary that doesn't make since. transition words are very needed to help your paper make since and flow all together.
No sally cannot because the information is not related to holly. the information has to do john. If sally tells holly when the paperwork is ready to be picked up holly could possibly not give the papers to john.
