(B). It makes readers more comfortable with the idea of reading the essay if they can view it as if it were their own words
Anyone know the answer
the options are
<span>A.use of passive voice.B.wordinessC.inconsistent style</span>
The sentence above should be divided into two sentences. There should be a period after the word "made." So the correct sentence should be like this:
The 1957 Chevy Nomad is one of the finest vehicles ever made. My mother drives on that is in perfect condition.
His mother was a votares of my order