Answer:
I can help, i love writing especially songs. Here are a few suggestions for lyrics :) They aren't going to be as good right now because it is late but if you still need help in the morning ( Its 8:38 pm here and i woke up at 4) then i would be glad to help :)
Lyrics i made:
I feel like i'm searching a forbidden path
walking and walking but i think im trapped
the voices and secrets they get to my head
do they see it when i lie?
when i say that i'm alright
can they tell how long i've been looking?
i fall deep into this hole
still i keep searching slowly loosing hope
A few things you could correct:
" I barely know myself ( who am i?) so how can i know if the answers i find are real?" could possibly be changed to " If i dont even know who i am how can i know if the answers wont lead me down the wrong path?"
" So many things have changed yet it all feels the same" could be changed to " Everything is different but the rest stays the same"
True. He was a German writer and a German composer.
