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yKpoI14uk [10]
3 years ago
12

Can you revise my paragraph

English
2 answers:
Vesna [10]3 years ago
7 0

Answer: you should take out the part about the dog but overall it good

Explanation:

hichkok12 [17]3 years ago
6 0

Answer:

You need to look over your punctuation in the first line. In the first line, Instead of  "while there" I would put " while attending". Instead of "she", I would put "Nesbit"

Explanation:

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