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Yuliya22 [10]
3 years ago
8

Michael is giving his friend feedback on her paper. Which sections of his review contain constructive feedback?

English
2 answers:
kiruha [24]3 years ago
8 0
Constructive Feedback is a kind of feedback that focuses on an objective view basing it on factual observations. Constructive feedback aims at giving positive criticism to create room for a favorable outcome and improvement. Among the choices, number 3 contains constructive feedback. The rest of the choices are based on personal or subjective judgment. 
Firdavs [7]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

The correct answer is the third line, "I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you need to."

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