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Alenkinab [10]
3 years ago
6

Simile/analogy for mental health

English
1 answer:
alexira [117]3 years ago
3 0
‘Black dog’ analogy for depression.
‘Anxiety feels like the swallow of McCormick’s Cinnamon’.
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