Answer:
Honesty, motivation, and ability to respond.
Explanation:
D and then if that doesn't work B. If you have anything else to ask me further about my answer (cause I have got to admit it is quite vague) just ask.
Hope this helps :) x
Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
hoep this helps
Essentially 3. He stated that readers minds would "require a change of diet" and that stories should be read in one sitting to "capture the essence" of it.
Answer:
The storm clouds from the east had finally rolled onto the ranch. The ominous clouds took it’s place before the sky as the floodwaters of the heavens opened up to release the heavy droplets we know as “rain”. Soon ever blade of grass and every leaf from the tall oak trees were drenched in heavy rain. All the vegetation was struggling to stay up as the overbearing rain drops crushed them down. The night dragged on and with the passing of time brought the booming of thunder. Powerful bursts of Light streamed across the sky in an almost angery sort of way as the winds carried stray leaves and nearby rubbish into the unknown. The storm plowed on until the ranch was completely flooded. The vegetation was ruined and torn apart, the trees had lost many leaves from the powerful wind, and all the animals of the ranch were nowhere to be found. This stormy night had no mercy for the ranch.
hope this helps sorry it took so long to write and think of a good little story! :D
