Example:
One day, a boy walked to his friend’s house.
Which substitution in diction would best improve the setting in the sentence without changing the meaning of the sentence?
replace “day” with “warm afternoon”
Replace “a boy” with “Cameron”
Replace “walked” with “drove”
Replace “house” with “school”
Answer: Replace “a boy” with “Cameron”
Answer:
A doctor is bringing a horse inside of a building.
they are all treated equal
Answer:
no change
Explanation:
this sentence is grammatically correct. then is referring to the past, and we're talking about a place or in comparison to, which would be than.