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topjm [15]
3 years ago
12

PLS revise and grammaratize asap pls

English
2 answers:
Elza [17]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

no

Explanation:

allochka39001 [22]3 years ago
4 0
I hope this is ok, i changed some wording around, changed the last paragraph, and fixed some grammatical errors. Good luck!
Remember to use whatever format your teacher requires, like MLA. :)
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Have you ever thought jellyfish were bad? Imagine if a swarm of jellyfish were to come after you. What would you do? Jellyfish are becoming a concern; they are crowding fishing nets and are affecting power plant pipes. They have reduced the number of fish and are clogging power plant pipes. Jellyfish pose a threat to our economy, what will we do about it?

Jellyfish have ruined fish harvesting and drastically decreased the fish population. Also, they have ruined the power plants. The jellyfish sting and harm the fish, so they are causing fish to vacate local fishing areas. Since jellyfish continue to clog the pipes in power plants, it forcibly has to be shut down.

These electrifying fish have caused many problems for fishers and for power plant workers. Jellyfish are dangerous and are becoming the pests of the ocean. The solution to some of these problems are to use some extra precaution and smaller nets. These fish are a harmful and pesty problem for today's economy. And, because of this, the workers are forced to deal with the situation.

The major solution to this problem is to cut down on pollution. The reason for this is so the jellyfish have nothing to feed on. The reason for these swarms and clogging is because the jellyfish feed on the trash and pollution in the water. These fish are a threat to our economy and are a danger to humans and other animals. The jellyfish solution should be started immediately.

Now, you know that if you ever see a jellyfish in the water, most likely there are more nearby. Because their sting can be deadly, you should evacuate the water as soon as possible. They continue to clog pipes in power pants and get in the way of fishermen. What will the world do to stop this economic problem?
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