Answer:
Explanation:
Its pretty good, I would reccommend that you should change
"The echoes of demise reverberate throughout my ears." to "The echoes of demise reverberate in my ears."
"I have slash open my enemies, " to "I slash open my enemies"
"The scarlet hue of their corpses bows before me, " to "the scarlet hue of their corpses bow before me"
"But darkness’s claw clutches hold of my eyes, " to "But darkness’ claw clutches my eyes, "
"The coldness of the steel penetrates my muscles," to "The steel's coldness penetrates my muscles,"
also I don't really know what the And line is for.
The part of the question that gives us the most information is that we're looking for a contrast, or a way of comparison. So imagine you want to compare a big and a small elephant, you could say :
<span>although one is big, the other one is small
one is big which is good, conversely the other one is small which is also not bad
one is big, however, the other one is small
An elephant is big. in contrast that one is small
So we see that all four of them can be used to express contrast!
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So every day I wove on the great loom, but every night by torchlight I
unwove it; and so for three years I deceived the Akhaians.
<span>This line shows that Penelope is clever because at the beginning of the
passage, Penelope requests that the suitors leave her alone and not ask her to
marry until she finishes weaving a death shroud she had already started because
if she were not allowed to finish, her efforts at beginning the shroud would
have been in vain. To this appeal to their
emotions, the suitors agree. And,
knowing the suitors would respect her request, at the end of a day of weaving,
she would undo all she had done in the daytime thereby keeping the suitors at
bay for 3 years. </span>
