Answer:
Add a little more details.
Explanation:
Hello, it looks good, just add details like the time, food, photographers, etc.
Here is a website for meaningful poems. I think you can find a good one on here. I couldn't really find a clean meaningful rap song so I tried to find a poem, but I don't know what kind of thing you like so here you go, https://classicalpoets.org/2016/01/07/10-greatest-poems-ever-written/
Answer:
Subject: We Verb: cahnces
Explanation:
We can heavily influence our chances of developing cancer.
Explanation:
It shows how Rachel grows as a character overcomes conflicts. It tells us her inner thoughts and how she feels throughout the story. The 1st person writing also helps us relate to Rachel about difficult and embarrassing moments and about emotions.
I think the author made the story in 1st person to show us how Rachel evolves a character and overcomes challenges. Also we know Rachel is shy and doesn't speak up for her herself it shows her inner conflict and how she gradually tries to overcome it.
