Changing the sentence from a very long sentence into a short and choppy helps the suspense by not giving the reader a lot of information and making them really think and wonder.
For example:
"The stranger watched, a look in his eyes and this feeling spread throughout my body."
or
"There was a man watching, his blue eyes had this look in them that made me shiver with fear. His pale face held no emotion and made him seem as if he was just a corpse standing on his own."
The second one might sound better, yes, but the second one really makes you think and really builds the suspense.
"Who is this stranger? What does he look like? What feeling spread throughout their body?"
So instead of knowing a lot about this stranger, you know little to nothing and it really makes you want to know more, and definitely build the suspense.
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She then goes to describe the interactions between us and the Author Linda Hogan
<span>s a child, Dede is always smiling, trying to please. She is intelligent, inevitability and from a young age her father depends on her to "help with the books". Dede volunteers to stay behind with her parents so her sisters can go to boarding school (Chapter 1). Though she is attracted to the rebel Lio, Dede is silent about her desires and loses him to her sister Minerva. In a furtive attempt to assert herself, Dede burns Lio's letter asking Minerva to flee the country with him, but she cannot allow herself to the inevitability of the life expected of her. She marries her domineering childhood sweetheart Jaimito, and finds herself "already beginning to compromise with the man" even before they are wed. Dede knows that "if she...(thinks) long and hard about what (is) right and wrong", she would join her sisters in revolution, but she does not because her husband forbids it (Chapter 5).Dede finds her voice only after her sisters' deaths. In the immediate aftermath she screams her defiance to the SIM, then takes charge of the girls' funeral arrangements and raises their children. After several years she leaves Jaimito and establishes herself in the business world. Dede retains much of her old self in her new life, however. She continues to achieve, winning prizes yearly for "the most sales of anyone in her company", and sacrifices her privacy to keep the memory of her sisters alive (Epilogue).</span>
In Walt Whitman’s poem “Song of Myself,” lines 7-16 introduce several
important themes that will reoccur frequently. For instance, when
Whitman references the many past generations of family members that led
to his birth (7), he illustrates the countless and myriad generations of
humanity that are distilled down in the present generation. Furthermore, when Whitman references “creeds and schools in abeyance” (10), he
touches on the many differing beliefs and ideas at work in the world,
which will again be an important addition to his discussion of
multiplicity throughout the poem. Finally, Whitman’s description of
smelling many perfumes (14-16) is a precursor to his later mission to
inhale and swallow as many different experiences as possible. (you can add more this is just some stuff I found)
That is for lines 7-16 that I found. I dont know about verse 52
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