Answer:
Can you please add a picture or something?
Explanation:
Answer:
B. Word choice
Explanation:
If your editor keeps noticing and pointing out reppetition, then you may want to try and be more diverse woth your wording. Definetley try using different adjectives to add more detail and keep it interesting for the reader.
I don't know I just need points.
is this a question from ur school?. if so this is something you should answer or ur own......