Think of one rule in your home which your parents strictly enforced (e.g., curfew, no sleepovers, no smoking, or the like). Writ
e an essay with a minimum of three paragraphs regarding this rule. Use coherence and cohesion in your essay Use thus following guide to help you develop your content 1. Analyze the reasons why this rule is enforced. 2. State whether or not you agree with the enforcement of this rule. 3. What would be the consequences if you disobey this rule. 4. What are the effects of obeying the rule. 5. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the enforcement of this rule? 6. How does this affect your growth as a person? If you were to make a version of yourself, how would you do it? Would you retain most of your original self or put some twist to it? Explain your answer
parents are overprotective. It honestly frustrates me when half the time I’m never allowed to go anywhere with my friends, and go to places without my parents having to be …show more content…
for example, when I go out with my friends, they always tell me that I have to be home by 10:00, and I have to obey them and go home on time because when I’m not on time there will be a consequence. Last month I went to my best friend’s birthday party and I was surprised that my parents allowed me to go out but I have to be home by 10:00 pm. I was enjoying my time at the party and I didn’t even notice the time and it was 1:00 am. I looked at my phone my parents have 25 missed call and I knew that I’m in trouble. I was grounded for 2 weeks and my mom confiscated my phone because I didn’t answer her phone call. I didn’t feel bad because it’s actually my fault if I was really aware of my time I wouldn’t be on that situation and I still love my …show more content…
My mom used to tell me in the old days they were more strict than today. Their parents don’t let them go out without any companion. They had to do their chores every day before they could go out, and their parents also picked the right guy for them and that is hard because being with a guy that they don’t love is totally unfair. I can’t imagine placing myself in that situation but my parents are using that rule to me and it’s so unfair for my part. For example, there was a time that I had to go to my friend’s birthday party, and my mom wouldn’t let me go out without any companion, so I have to bring my cousin with me to be sure that I went there and didn’t go some other place. I mean I’m old enough to go there alone without any companion with me. I just want to do my own thing and just be me. I want to be independent, and my parents just don’t get it. My parents are being strict because they are afraid of losing me. As I am their only child it’s their responsibility to protect me.
In informal writing, a writer will often show more empathy towards the reader. They may, for example, explain a more complex thought more clearly. This is linked to the more personal style in informal writing, which is more suited to conveying emotions.
