Argument 1: America is a country which has the highest rate of mental illness this is important because children need to develop within new generations it will serve us well if more time is devoted into emotional well-being Argument 2: A Childs intelligence is a very powerful thing if a child grows up in a bad household if they are bullied at school, if a child has any Bad things happening their intelligence will outweigh at the time it’s not worth spending on this because it’s not an issue for everyone
Argument 1 ;; Weakness ;; Social learning isn't relevant to the mainly logical school system. Strength ;; It has proof and shown research in the given argument, unlike the opposing side, its not entirely based on an emotional view point.
Argument 2 ;; Weakness ;; 'the true way to achieve financial success is to be well educated' That may be true to most jobs, but history shows that there are many historical figures that have become famous or financially successful. Not Only that Students don't go to school gardens often, students mainly go once a month of for minor class projects so its not a big deal in general. It doesn't impact a students learning unless its the student getting distracted with the task of going to the garden. Having garden time is like having elementary school recces. Strength ;; The minor show of research, and the concern towards students and education.
i personally think this is a really bad answer sheet but i guess you can build off it?
