Question

Edit the following sentence to make it more parallel. To become a professional musician takes thousands of hours of practice and also working hard to make connections in the industry.

Answer 1

Explanation:

Note, to make a sentence more parallel simply means separating the details to allow easy understanding and remembrance by the readers of what was said.

So it could be written as;

To become a professional musician involves taking:

• thousands of hours of practice and
• finally working hard to make connections in the music industry.