The problems you see: is where is says “won’t eat nothing accept” when it should be “won’t eat anything accept”
ALSO it should be spelled leaves, not leafs.
Elementary school students are not aloud to talk while the teacher reads until after lunch
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wow that's really good, but you should put "women's right"
just a suggestion other than that, it's really good :)
Lawyers help the city and they do this job because the city needs them and they help crimes
you could do one on
your morning routine if you were royalty
or preparing to go out later
being home alone while someones breaking in
etc..
