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zlopas [31]
3 years ago
13

Can someone revise my writing?

English
1 answer:
Luden [163]3 years ago
8 0

Capitalize trust and make sure to add a comma after safe instead of a period, jsut check your capitalization and your commas and periods, i'm pretty sure the rest is right. Hope this helps you out.

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