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german
2 years ago
10

Can you tell me what’s wrong with this paragraph I really need help I will give you points please help me

English
2 answers:
Svetradugi [14.3K]2 years ago
7 0

Answer:

"feeled" becomes felt, drivers needs an apostrophe, comma between astronauts and but.

Explanation:

deff fn [24]2 years ago
6 0

Answer:

High/Speed should be “high-speed”

Feeled should be “felt”

The ? at the end should be either a “.” or a “.”

Race-car could be “racecar”

Astronauts should probably have a “,”

Od should be replaced with “odd”

Most of these should be correct.

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