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laila [671]
3 years ago
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MARKING BRAINLIEST: QUESTION ABOUT DIALOGUE : Ok so i'm writing a memoir from the first time I smoked for my AP LANG class. I ju

st need someone to tell me if my punctuation and dialogue are all good. If my dialogue isn't, could you tell me where I messed up and how to fix it?
(if some swear words look weird its cuz i had to change them so brainly would let me post this)

Dialogue:
Everyone was looking at me, waiting expectantly for me to smoke it. "Ayo imma have to pass on this one. I'm just not the smoker type," I said with a nervous laugh. "That's cap," one of the guys yelled across the circle. Josh looked at me with a sideways stare while all the guys began egging me to take just one hit. To my left, AJ, a kid I've only met a few times, started taunting me until I began to feel butterflies creep up again. "My guy, just take the hit. You got all these fine ahh females around, and you're making yourself look like a bussy every second you waste," he said. Tyler, another junior, chimed in and said, "Naw, he's just after Emma they've been practically on top of one another. Ain't that Jabreel?"
Advanced Placement (AP)
1 answer:
user100 [1]3 years ago
7 0
It looks good the punctuation is on spot too
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