1.moving from easily understood concepts..
2.a group of sentences that deal with one central..
3.an element between paragraphs..
4.may be pointed to..
5.two or more main clauses...
6.helps express...
7.paragraph staying with one...
8.arranged in order that events occured
The repetition of the word “whirl” creates a sense of "intensity".
"Oread", one of Hilda Doolittle’s best-known lyrics, which was first distributed in the issue of BLAST in 1914, serves to outline this early style well. The title Oread was included after the piece was first composed, to propose that a nymph was ordering up the ocean. Here is the short poem, (One of my favorites);
Whirl up, sea—
whirl your pointed pines,
splash your great pines
on our rocks,
hurl your green over us,
cover us with your pools of fir.
I would use a two arrows to switch windy and was around
1-4 look correct to me.
for #5, you are correct that to come is not a prepositional phrase because there is no object. If I were you, I'd leave it alone and keep the one next it. all others look correct.
The tone is Ironic and Cynical.
