Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
<span>The author of "on turning ten" includes the childhood fantasies, such as being invisible or a prince, in order to
</span><span> show the creativity of the speaker.
he wants to know the reader that how creative is the speaker
so i conclude option A is correct
hope it helps</span>
Answer:
Can I come to the next class?
Explanation:
Hope this is right!'
God bless you!
Answer:
<u>Friendly letter</u>
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WISDOM SCHOOL,
P.O.BOX - 50-900900,
CENTER.
4/17/2019
Dear Sam,
How are you doing? Receive my warm greetings. How is your new school, hope all is well there.
We are doing fine here, there has been a lot of development in our school since you left.
There has been built a new administration block, we do not need to walk to the other end of the school compound since it is just few meters away from our class.
The journalism club won a county award which made us shine.
Hope I shall see you soon during the school break.
Yours sincerely,
Winnie.
Where are the questions? I need more information
