This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
This is a matter of perception. Evil inflicted for no justifiable reason is in itself evil. However, murder is evil yet in certain circumstances, one can be forced to act in an evil manner, without choice, especially when protecting yourself or a loved one
U need to work to be successful that's the 1 step to do to be successful
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eat sit to to do only this are simple sentence
