Question

What is the best way to revise these sentences to make them more descriptive? Rafael attends a class in mindfulness meditation. He sits and breathes. He relaxes. It reduces stress. (3 points) A) When Rafael sits in a class and practices mindfulness mediation, he relaxes and reduces his stress. B) Rafael sits quietly and breathes in and out. He is in a class and he is practicing mindfulness mediation to help him relax and reduce stress. C) Rafael likes to sit and breathe in class for 15 minutes. Mindfulness mediation helps him feel relaxed and less stressed. D)Rafael sits quietly for 15 minutes and breathes in and out. As he practices mindfulness mediation, his breathing becomes deeper and slower. He feels relaxed and less stressed out.

Answer 1

I think that  (D)  is the best answer.

Answer 2

D)Rafael sits quietly for 15 minutes and breathes in and out. As he practices mindfulness mediation, his breathing becomes deeper and slower. He feels relaxed and less stressed out.