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In paragraph 1 i think you spelled socialize wrong.
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K-key idea
E- evidence -1
A- analyze evidence( give your thoughts
T-transition-( i.e.- Continuing on,
E- Evidence -2
A- analyze evidence
L- link the paragraph all together
it really helps to keep everything organized and consistent. For your introduction, try using a hook, a bridge , and finally a thesis. A thesis should ALWAYS be the last sentence in your intro paragraph.
For your conclusion start of with your thesis, go into your Main ideas of the essay, and then give something for the reader to think about (clincher)
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Tone helps develop theme by reinforcing the general message of the work through diction and atmosphere
Explanation:
The meaning of the underlined word revolution is change or transformation.
<h3>What is synonyms?</h3>
Synonyms refer to words which have similar meaning with the original word or the word nearest in meaning with the real words.
Therefore, The meaning of the underlined word revolution is change or transformation.
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Read this excerpt from "Choreographers of Matter, Life, and Intelligence. " Clearly, we are on the threshold of yet another <u>revolution</u>. Human knowledge is doubling every ten years.
Learn more about synonyms below.
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Answer:
There aren't any computers.
Explanation:
To change any sentence into negative you must change the axillary verb into negative.
