That is an example of an aliteration, or giving life to lifeless things throguh description.\
I’ll give you some ideas.
1. Asked for help when completing a math assignment. Felt embarrassed to need helpful but once I received the help I felt accomplished.
2. I had asked for help when I was unsure of which direction my class was. I felt okay to ask for help since it had been the first week of school. Once they helped me out I felt appreciative towards them.
3. I asked for help when searching for a certain book. I felt nervous to ask an employee, but once they helped me find it I realized I shouldn’t have worried in the first place.
This was super rushed. Sorry!
Prep phrases in the beginning of a sentence are separated from the independent clause by a comma.
after a long civil war that devastated his native nigeria (prep), the main character in civil peace rebuilds his life.
internal clauses will also be separated with commas when they do not flow logically with the rest of the independent clause.
elie wiesel (ind. clause), recalling his suffering in the nazi concentration camps (int. clause), often spoke out against similar oppression (continued ind. clause).
