Answer:
The first sentence needs a capital letter.
In the 5th line, "camp" doesn't need to be capitalized, and a period or exclamation point is needed at the end instead of a question mark.
In the eighth line, "Sixteenth" doesn't need to be capitalized.
On the ninth line, no commas are needed.
On the tenth line, "Inspiration" needs to be capitalized since it's part of the name.
On the last line, no comma is needed.
Answer:
I can't see the scene , I don't know but all I can say is explain what you see
Needs:
Water/Food/Shelter/Warmth
Wants:
Toys/Big Houses/ Expensive things/Fame
Where are the options? Need to see them to decide on the answer. T-t-t-today junior!!
Answer:
tone express author writing style,feeling and personality.
