For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:Any Options?
Explanation: Cambria sang in her school's talent showcase, which made her grandparents proud.
1. To prepare students for their futue roles in society
2. To provide an alternative to the violence and dishonesty students see around them
Hope this helps!!!!
Answer:
We <u>had</u> a lot of fun at the soccer game last night.
Explanation:
Since the soccer game was last night, the sentence is past tense, so we choose the answer that is in past tense, which is "had".
Answer:
a dark night or a dark knight
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