Tell them that u love them but u need freedom that’s all I do lol
I believe from what I see that every sentence has been turned from present tense to past tense. One example could be Number 5- Instead of, 'Peter is going to take the package later.", it could be in past tense, as in Peter already took the package- "Later, Peter took the package."
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Answer: Maybe a good like ending statement would be like having your topic sentnce paraphrased as your ending statement?
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