"The gold key is a pretty horrific symbol of the lengths the government will go to in order to brainwash children into enlisting in the military. They tell them that this key will get them into heaven if they die at war. This harkens back to ancient religious wars, like the Crusades, where dying a martyr was the best possible thing a boy could do. Although, in reality, all it means is that they died as pawns of the government.
This key is an especially repulsive symbol because it holds absolutely no intrinsic value—it's "a plastic key painted gold" (13.34). The Iranian military couldn't even give kids something of value to lure them into war, something they might be able to melt down for money. Of course, what value does money have to a martyr? You can't spend it when you're in the theoretical halls of heaven, with more virgins for the taking than you know what to do with."
I would like to meet Jesse Pinkman from breaking bad I want to meet this fictional character because I feel like if I met him I would help him feel better throughout his sadness.
If you write one sentence describing the original paragraph's hook, and then a second sentence describing any supporting evidence in the paragraph, and then a third sentence describing the topic sentence, you will have written your critique.
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Explanation: Sample Response: I would find images that would hook the audience's interest while also being relevant to the story. I'd also have to make sure that they were public domain images. I would look for images of sled dogs, the Alaskan wilderness, miners, and images that showed a conflict between civilization and nature
