The turkey heading for slaughter asking about health care critiques current healthcare systems.
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
- I accidentally cut my finger with the knife when I was cutting tomatoes.
- I asked my neighbor if he could cut the rope for me.
- Placing it in a plate, he cut it up in small pieces .
- He yelled, and I felt the knife cut deeper into his skin.
- I almost cut the entire section of the book.
The most fitting answer would be C. while and however