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Here it is:
In the movie, life is really beautiful.The main character was Guido,an optimistic person.He has a personality that always puts a smile on the face even things doesn't go well with his expectations.He is good at accepting things,like when there is negative thing happens, seems he is not even affected at all aspects but the truth is,he does.
Guido and me are somehow alike.In front of the people, being funny,silly,goofy and a happy girl they see,but deep inside I have a lot of battles that I just kept hidden.Somebody could not thought that,at this age,I already take some breakthroughs.
What are your answers forone and two
Answer:
i wanna say its c but i have a strong feelin ab E
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Answer:
descriptions of places, description of people, and relevant facts and details.
Explanation:
Okay, here’s what I’ll do for you. I’ll answer your questions in a few words, and I want you to make sure the answers are longer than the ones I give you. 1) This paragraph does not flow at all. 2) The rhythm is very choppy. 3) The most important ideas are when she moves to the West Coast because it gives more detail on her life. The least important is her childhood and how she is brought up because it hardly talks about it. 4) The ideas aren’t well connected because it just states facts and doesn’t expand on them. 5) The relationship is basically what ever happened next in her life, no detail. 6) I would add more detail and make the sentences less choppy. This should help you rewrite the paragraph.
